darkhyuuga
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D.gray man... enough said.
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Post by darkhyuuga on Apr 17, 2008 15:45:57 GMT -5
This isn’t our place. Was said. And we left In a distance A voice cried out. Weakness. And we rushed. It didn’t matter to us Yet it was an everything. Something that consisted of nothing Yet tried to bloom. Human less barren lands that blessed the soil. Spirits rejoiced as we left Its land hollowed. And loved Fostering a warmth, a heart. A nothing.
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Post by zemira on Apr 18, 2008 11:21:18 GMT -5
I'm not too good with poetry, but I did like it. It seemed depressing, which I like, lol. But, I know with poetry the flow is very important. And I can't really tell if something flows well, which is why my poetry sucks, lol.
But to me, it was good, lol.
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Thunderous
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They Have Pulled Down Deep Heaven on Their Heads
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Post by Thunderous on Apr 18, 2008 22:31:12 GMT -5
I like it. ...What's it about?
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Post by milchild05 on Apr 21, 2008 16:31:58 GMT -5
i'm not rying to be clishe.... but its really deep. "a nothing" is a disapointment right? and the people were disapointed because the land wasn't fertile.
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