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Post by allichie on Aug 31, 2007 21:04:22 GMT -5
FAN FICTION! YAAAY!
I've got none right now but you can put yours here!
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Post by allichie on Aug 31, 2007 21:13:29 GMT -5
ok, I have no fan fic but I have tons of extremely short stories here's two:
1. Escapism
Run. The dark corridor lay before me, never ending and never changing. The doors continued to fly by rapidly, and the torches kept up they’re ominous glow. I could feel my heartbeat in my chest and my lungs were gasping for breath, but I couldn’t stop. RUN! The voice that was everywhere was frantically urging me faster. My sight was hazy with the effort, but I couldn’t give up, not now. Not after all that I’d been through…… RUN!!!! I screamed and forced my legs to move faster, but I couldn’t escape the doom that was sure to catch me. Then, amidst my raging emotions, a single thought crossed my mind; what was I running from?
2. Reaching
The darkness encompassed me in its cold hard grip. The only sign that I was still alive was my beating heart and slow even breathing. My body was numb from the cold and I felt nothing but the frozen ground beneath my feet. The air was still. I brought one foot in front of the other and searched for something in the nothingness. My pace quickened as I was struck with panic. I had no idea of where I was going or where I had been, only that I needed to get out. An orb of light appeared in the distance, suspended in the air. I ran faster to catch up to the only sign of hope I could see. I slowed as I approach the glowing sphere and in the center I could now see the radiant face of a girl. She smiled and opened her arms to me. I smiled back and reached out to her with one hand. I was so close to relief, so close to happiness. Just as I was about to grasp it, the orb shattered and I was thrust once again into utter blackness.
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Post by bluephoenix on Aug 31, 2007 22:55:55 GMT -5
who is it?! intriguing...
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Post by allichie on Sept 1, 2007 12:55:46 GMT -5
just some random person I made up
here's a random poem I made up (I'm bored)
Who says the cat won't tell you a tale, about when only the red rooster's crow will prevail.
The carniverous flower will lick and comsume. It will rage and spew it's thick fumes.
As the galloping waves would thunder past, all knew that the hate could not last.
See slippery streams slithering out of the ground. To hear, you must be quiet and not make a sound.
Light may come again but darkness is eternity, but for now, oblivion is the alternity.
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Post by Maliris on Sept 1, 2007 13:29:53 GMT -5
I just created a sub-board for fanficions and writings of any kind.
So, this thread will have a new home. :>
-> moved~ <3
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Post by allichie on Sept 1, 2007 13:37:19 GMT -5
Ok, so I guess now this is my very own little thread YAAAY!
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Post by allichie on Sept 1, 2007 13:55:59 GMT -5
The putrid smell of smoke consumed the air while panicked people flooded the streets. Their screeches of terror and agony were the only sound to be heard. A baby sat wailing by the side of the street, discarded like trash. A sharp boom reached his ears as once again another car exploded and sparks were thrown into the air, ready to catch it's next victim. The baby only cried louder. There was no escape for the doomed city folk, the pillars of smoke blocked every exit. Some accepted their fate and stood quietly on the side walk, contemplating their final moments, while still others ran around in circles, praying for a miracle. Today was the day we die. Better make the most of it...
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Post by shyviolet on Sept 1, 2007 14:07:25 GMT -5
Nice, I like your short writing. It's very effective.
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Post by allichie on Sept 1, 2007 20:31:32 GMT -5
I awoke to the sound of the car’s dying engine. Shards of glass were scattered all over the dashboard and my clothes were stained with blood. Hot and wet liquid trickled down my check.
“DAD!” I tried to scream but the only noise that escaped my throat was a hoarse whisper. I tried to sit up but the slightest movement rent my skull in two. I waited, unmoving, till the pain subsided to a dull throbbing before attempting to rise again.
I sat up slowly and scanned the surrounding area through the cracked glass. On thehorizonn the sun was slipping easily behind the canopy of trees, the last slivers of golden rays snaked their way through the dense leaves. Sharp shadows streaked across the spots of shimmering grass. Finally able to look past the wreckage I was beginning to understand what had occurred. My Dad, consumed in his rage, had narrowly missed hitting the man who came out of nowhere and drove off the road into a steep ditch, but he was not on the seat next to me.
Slowly and painfully I dragged myself out and lay on the grass, crying and moaning when I discovered my right arm was broken. I looked around for anything familiar and caught site of a human sized lump on the grass twenty feet in front of the car.
“DAD!” I screamed again and crawled to his side, but the only reply was my scream of agony when I discovered that he was already gone.
“Two down, one to go,” a smooth voiced hissed behind me. I jumped up still cradling my arm to see a pale man with hair the color of moonlight and blood red eyes. The eyes of a predator. He approached my father's lifeless body with feline grace. It was the same man we had almost hit. He stared disdainfully at the corpse and returned his smothering eyes back to my carefully composed face. His perfect features, menacing smile and merciless craving gaze made me cringe. “Such a shame your father had to die...”
The dwindling strands of light flecked across the mans face as he sauntered forward with desire to end a life.
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Post by Aryeec {E.F. Forester} on Sept 10, 2007 18:24:24 GMT -5
I absolutely love it! Nice work! You should join and post stuff like that regularly!
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Post by allichie on Sept 10, 2007 19:57:16 GMT -5
I did join I'm skyrider
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Post by kerosene on Sept 13, 2007 22:21:50 GMT -5
Dude that last short story like totally blew my mind. I wish i could wright like that.
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skyrider
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Post by skyrider on Sept 14, 2007 17:38:09 GMT -5
to everyone out there: I'm not really posting any more stories here I am allichie and I'm posting on "Who says the cat won't tell you a tale?"
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