Pombar
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Post by Pombar on Feb 18, 2007 18:13:01 GMT -5
The Wikipedia Page for Broken Sky that I shoddily set up about a year ago is still in need of general cleaning up, and perhaps even splitting into multiple pages to cover different themes, objects, etc. Setting it up in a similar vein to a manga/anime wiki page probably wouldn't be a bad idea, given the nature of it... But yes! Basically, I'm a bit too rubbish at all this kind of thing, and it'd be great to have support from the wider community on this to help make a wiki page worthy of the series. Anyone think brushing up this page as a community's a good idea at all?
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Post by bluephoenix on Feb 18, 2007 23:25:07 GMT -5
sure! I know quite a bit, I'll help as much as you want.
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Post by Tama on Feb 20, 2007 14:40:24 GMT -5
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Post by Pombar on Feb 22, 2007 7:56:26 GMT -5
Ah, sorry, I missed that thread when I was looking through to check... (a big duh on my account) But yes, it's an awfully huge job - I had no idea where to start when I made it, but I felt that there needed to be one; thus that disorganised mess. I'm going to try and look through how other similar pages are constructed and shamelessly copy learn from them. Any and all organisation help would of course be welcome, especially if some people actually know how to work it... and of course feel free to edit out my many probable mistakes.
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Post by fuzzycheez2 on Mar 8, 2007 22:13:10 GMT -5
I'd like to try helping out with that. I'm not super wikiproficient, but I'll do what I can!
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Post by ryushi on Mar 11, 2007 4:48:18 GMT -5
It has no mention whatsoever of Araciel. And I love her!
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Post by Pombar on Jan 11, 2008 15:56:58 GMT -5
Okay, it's been a long time coming, but I've revised the first half or so of the Wiki page. Addressed concerns that the "Plot" section was far too spoiler-iffic, and that it was too much of a Plot Summary rather than an introduction as seen in most similar Wiki pages. If we want a Plot Summary section, we could consider changing the title of the current Plot bit to Story or something to dissassociate the two. Also just generally worked on the stones bits, cleaning them all up and lengthening them. And finally, brushed up the intro bit at the top so that it wasn't just a repeat of the Plot section. Thanks to all those who've helped here and there over the last year, and any more help would be awesome and stuff.
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Post by lisajane on Jan 11, 2008 16:54:44 GMT -5
I'll help. Haven't edited on Wikipedia before but I can get down the information.
Edit - on the stones, I think Aurin has pale green stones... Takami has the swirling black and green stones.
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Post by Tama on Jan 11, 2008 17:20:49 GMT -5
From Communion - it seems that Aurin has green and black stones, from what her power is described as. :\
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Post by lisajane on Jan 11, 2008 23:53:56 GMT -5
Green and black is the colour of the power... when Aurin/Li'ain shows Kia her stones in part eight, they're pale green.
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Post by Pombar on Jan 12, 2008 10:12:23 GMT -5
Ah, nice one. I wasn't sure of any of the stones' colours, so I just changed the descriptions. I didn't think Takami had swirling rainbow stones or whatnot. Another thing that bugged me - is there a definite instance where we get told the colour of the Noman stones? I'd rather not have the colour listed as "Noman" like that, it's kind of jarring next to all the others being listed by colour.
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Post by lisajane on Jan 12, 2008 22:30:51 GMT -5
I thought the Noman stones were black and white... I don't remember if that's noted in the books, but I think on the little character cards it's marked as black and white.
Edit - found the character cards. Noman stones are white with black tiger stripes.
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