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Post by kaiku on Nov 20, 2008 15:07:43 GMT -5
Ooh, this is my favourite so far. Very moving. I like how you start each new stanza with part of the previous line. Poor forest!
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 20, 2008 15:12:28 GMT -5
*Does Victory dance* I love how encouraging people are on this site! It makes me soooo happy that people like my stuff! Woo! I may post one more poem tonight. It's about 9/11... Sorta missed the date but I can still post i think... What do you think?
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Post by Raihor on Nov 20, 2008 22:06:34 GMT -5
I've got chills. In a good way. This is the best d**n poem I've ever read, and I am not exaggurating! I want you to get published just so I can buy a book with this poem in it! I especially love the structure. I don't know how, but it somehow matches the melancholy aire that the poem has. And the last lines of each statement, they are just wow. I can relate to your experience. I remember being driven to my, err, grandparents' house cottage in Norway. I didn't recognise where we were, and suddenly I saw the path to the cottage that I knew so well. But the surroundings were wrong. The forest was gone. I think I died a little inside at that point And also, isn't this just the most awesome forum on the whole internet? I think so! ;D
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 21, 2008 3:03:46 GMT -5
Wow... just... WOW! Thank you soo much for your amazing comment. I hope to get published one day, perhaps just a little book of my own poetry... I'll tell you if I ever manage it! Lol! I agree, this is the best forum on the internet I've found. Everyone is just so darn nice! I've had some of my poems up on a site called Muse bunny for AGES and nothing. but Now I'm here and everyone is saying such lovely things to me! Yay!
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Post by Raihor on Nov 21, 2008 4:13:13 GMT -5
There's this one forum I'm a member of (no names mentioned), and I swear all the members who post in the creation section are just.. Irritating!
If it's not like, better than a professional work they'll all post saying how bad it is, and usually not constructively. As for writings, if they even bother reading those then they'll just shoot you down unless you are like, a published author or something.
Heck, those guys would probably even criticise Chris! grr!
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 21, 2008 14:01:39 GMT -5
Wow... that must suck... I guess then I can't complain. No comments is better than snobby, bi*chy comments. I Don't like people who just flame you for the sake of flaming. And if you look, I bet not one of them have written anything, and if they have it's absolute sh- ... rubbish. What? I was going to say rubbish. Honest. But thank you so much for commenting. It makes me so happy to see people like my stuff.
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Post by Raihor on Nov 21, 2008 18:12:35 GMT -5
You're right. They're all talk, but I'm sure they can't write worth... rubbish.
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 24, 2008 3:08:14 GMT -5
I've received three flames for my fanfic on fanfiction.net. Well, one was on a teasp00n and an open mind. But I always find it funny when you follow their names, and it comes up with no stories. And they're insulting you for things like slow updates! Hilarious if you ask me!
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Post by Raihor on Nov 24, 2008 11:36:02 GMT -5
ahaha! So true!
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Post by zemira on Nov 24, 2008 11:56:41 GMT -5
Please don't double and triple post. Your teas'p'o'o'n was edited because of s'p'o'o'n which is in the word filter as a bad word.
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 24, 2008 11:59:37 GMT -5
Sorry I was trying to see whether it would work. I'll delete them. Why is it a bad word?
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Post by zemira on Nov 24, 2008 12:02:31 GMT -5
Honestly, I'm not sure. I think it means something bad in England. Here in America, it means cuddling up to another person. Nothing sexual about it.
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 24, 2008 12:05:31 GMT -5
I'm living in England, and I've never heard it as being something bad. Though my brother told me I run like a sp00n. Or a duck... And the worst thing is, he's right lol!
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Post by Raihor on Nov 24, 2008 12:08:09 GMT -5
What, the word sp00n? Isn't that an eating implament?
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 24, 2008 12:19:10 GMT -5
Yep. I don't know either. I think maybe my brother means like in the nursery rhythm. You know "and the dish ran away with the sp00n" but unless the sp00n tripped over it's own feet and dragged the dish on top of it, i really fail to see the resemblance
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