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Post by Raihor on Nov 19, 2008 11:37:36 GMT -5
Woooow! Must be really good, because it's rhyming poem that I actually enjoyed reading! (I have a weird taste that gives rhyming like -500 points... I'm so fussy!) Anyway, great work, especially the last 2... 3, 4... ALL OF IT, haha!
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Post by kaiku on Nov 19, 2008 15:20:01 GMT -5
I really liked that! Especially: and the last two lines.
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Post by Sake-chan on Nov 20, 2008 3:21:03 GMT -5
Oh wow!!! Thank you both of you! This is the first time anyone has commented on this poem outside of the scouse house (where i read my poems and where it got an award) but I cannot tell you how happy both your comments made me! Raihor, I'm glad that even though it's not your favourite type of poetry, you still liked it. Becca, you chose my favourite lines as you own too . Thank you both! Have some karma. Oh, and p.s love the Howls Moving Castle icon! Made of win! I love that line that you've got: "Here's another curse: May all your bacon burn" Brilliant!
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Post by Raihor on Nov 20, 2008 6:57:22 GMT -5
I love the ending also. Storywise and structure-wise too. It seems people tend not to read my stuff though (*cough, cough*), so I can relate to your happiness
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Post by kaiku on Nov 20, 2008 14:14:52 GMT -5
It seems people tend not to read my stuff though (*cough, cough*), so I can relate to your happiness Aww, I did read your Obsession story, I just forgot to comment! Sorry! I'll go and do it now, before I forget again.
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